Oh man, what a ride of a chapter! I got really scared Eames was getting lost in there; yet it's hard not to have sympathy for Alex. And I really enjoy how your previous plotting made things clear enough in the reader's mind *prior* to the dream/heist that you could then write the dream itself this way, in that semi-ignorant, turned-around mysterious way. It works like hell, I love it.
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Date: 2011-03-14 02:46 pm (UTC)<3