ext_235595 ([identity profile] shaded-sun.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] the_ragnarok 2011-02-25 01:19 pm (UTC)

THEY ARE SO ADORABLE WHEN THEY ARE AWKWARD! :D

Instead he sets his teeth on the back of Arthur's neck, careful, only the barest light pressure. Eames likes the way skin feels between his teeth, pliant and strong, but he must be cautious with Arthur, who doesn't enjoy that sort of thing.
I think this is my favourite bit of this part. Well, I also loved the image of Arthur as an art theif & the whole discussion that sprang from that was great.

I also like how you're slowly ratcheting up the tension with those last few lines.

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